Friday, May 29, 2009

The Modernisation Of Wendy + Peter P. - Part 9

When night spreads her dark cloak upon the horizon, I sit by my window, holding my breath. I hope he comes. After last night, he might have given up on me. The ticking of the clock is maddening. As the hands spin the hours, I feel my hope fading.
I close my eyes and send out a wish, so that he might hear me. I open my eyes and there he is. That wonderful smile of his restores my spirits.
He enters after I open the window for him.
"I'm sorry."
"Wendy, you did nothing wrong."
"I've been thinking of you all day long."
He takes my hand in his.
"Come."
Still holding my hand, he leads me outside. I smile, happy to follow him.
This time he takes me to an island. It seems to be deserted as I see no signs of life. We sit on the sand. His hand has not left mine since the moment he held it.
We watch the waves roll up. I draw little circles in the sand with my bare toe. He looks down and grins ruefully.
"Perhaps I should warn you to bring your shoes next time."
"I think that would be good. At least we're not standing on rocks."
"Sorry again. I should have thought of it. But I was excited to see you."
"Me too."
We sit there, talking, until dawn. When the first splashes of pink appear on the dark blue sky, he turns to me.
"I should take you home."
I nod reluctantly.
We stand, say our goodbyes, and he sends me home.

3 comments:

ScoMan said...

It's confession time. I don't really remember the original Peter and Wendy story.

But I am enjoying what you're writing. Your words create the imagines in my mind. I could see your toe drawing circles in the sand.

Miss T said...

so you ahve actually been writing all of those? they are really interesting :)
is that the end of them?

Badriyyah said...

Scott: Aww... I just love you. Haha.

Tilly: Hi, welcome! Thanks... glad you're enjoying them. No... not quite the end yet. I'm just not quite sure where to take it. I'll keep you posted!